30 - ] Model SAT Tests
Test Thirty
Some
or all the parts of the following sentences are underlined . The first answer
choice , (A) , simply repeats the underlined part of the sentence . The other
four choices present four alternative ways to phrase the underlined part .
Select the answer that produces the most effective sentence , one that is clear
and exact , and blacken the appropriate space on your answer sheet . In
selecting your choice , be sure that it is standard written English , and that
it expresses the meaning of the original sentence .
Example
The first biography of author
Eudora Welty came out in 1998 and she was 89 years old at the time .
(A) and she was 89 years old at the time
(B) at the time when she was
89
(C) upon becoming an 89 year
old
(D) when she was 89
(E) at the age of 89 years
old
(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)
1 . Unable to see more than three
inches in front of her nose without corrective lenses . Mary’s search for
her missing glasses was frantic .
(A) Mary’s search for her
missing glasses was frantic .
(B) Mary’s frantic search was
for her missing glasses.
(C) Mary frantically searched
for her missing glasses .
(D) her missing glasses were
what Mary frantically searched for .
(E) her missing glasses was that
for which Mary frantically searched .
2 . Ron liked to play word games
, of which he found crossword puzzles particularly satisfying
(A) games , of which he found
crossword puzzles particularly satisfying
(B) games , and it was crossword
puzzles that particularly found satisfying
(C) games , particularly
satisfying to him were crossword puzzles
(D) games ; he found
crossword puzzles particularly satisfying
(E) games ; the satisfaction
of crossword puzzles particularly
3 . Martin Luther King
Jr.’s influence had a strong impact on the members of the Southern
Christian Leadership Conference , especially Jesse Jackson and Ralph Abernathy
.
(A)Martin Luther King Jr.’s
influence had a strong impact on the members
(B) Martin Luther King Jr.’s
influence had a strong impact regarding the members
(C) Martin Luther King Jr. strongly
influenced members
(D) the influence Martin
Luther King Jr. was strong on the members
(E) Martin Luther King Jr.’s
influence strongly impacted members
4 . Raise High the
Roofbeam , Carpenters is a novel written by the notoriously
reclusive J.D. Salinger .
(A) Raise High the
Roofbeam , Carpenters is a novel written by the notoriously reclusive J.D.
Salinger .
(B) Raise High the
Roofbeam , Carpenters were a novel written by the notorious reclusive J.D.
Salinger .
(C) Raise High the
Roofbeam , Carpenters were a novel that the notoriously reclusive J.D.
Salinger .wrote
(D) as notorious recluse ,
J.D. Salinger has written a novel that is called Raise High the Roofbeam ,
Carpenters
(E) Raise High the
Roofbeam , Carpenters is the name of a novel that was written by the
notorious reclusive J.D. Salinger .
5 . That it is deemed
necessary to shield television viewers from ads concerning pressing public
issues while they are being bombarded with commercial pitches for beer and
sports utility vehicles is a sad commentary on the state of our cultural and of
our democracy .
(A) they are being bombarded
with commercial pitches for beer and sports utility vehicles is a sad
commentary on the state of our cultural and of our democracy .
(B) they had been bombarded
with commercial pitches for beer and sports utility vehicles sadly is a commentary on the state of our cultural and of
our democracy .
(C) it is bombarded with
commercial pitches for beer and sports utility vehicles is a sad commentary on
the state of our cultural and of our democracy .
(D) they are being bombarded
with commercial pitches for beer and sports utility vehicles is a sad
commentary on the state of our cultural and of our democracy .
(E) they are bombarding with
commercial pitches for beer and sports utility vehicles is a sad commentary on
the state of our cultural and of our democracy .
6 . There is simply no way
one can avoid conflict ; hence , if you must fight , fight to win .
(A) There is simply no way
one can avoid conflict ; hence
(B) In no way one can simply avoid
conflict ; hence
(C) You cannot avoid conflict
; hence
(D) There is simply no way
one can avoid conflict ; however,
(E) There is simply no way in
which you may avoid conflict ; consequently
7 . The federal Fish and
Wildlife Service is expected to rule this week on whether to protect beluga
sturgeon under the Endangered Species Act .
(A) is expected to rule this
week on whether to protect beluga sturgeon under the Endangered Species Act .
(B) are expected to rule this
week on whether to protect beluga sturgeon under the Endangered Species Act .
(C) have been expected to
rule this week on whether to protect beluga sturgeon under the Endangered
Species Act .
(D) is expected to rule this
week about the protecting of beluga sturgeon by means of the Endangered Species
Act .
(E) is being expected to rule this week on whether or not
they should protect beluga sturgeon under the Endangered Species Act .
8 . Businessman by day and
composer by night Charles Ives’s vast output has gradually brought him
recognition as the most original and significant American composer of the
nineteenth and early twentieth centuries .
(A) Businessman by day and
composer by night Charles Ives’s vast output has gradually brought him
recognition as
(B) Businessman by day and
composer by night , Charles Ives’s vast
output that has gradually brought him recognition from
(C) Businessman by day and
composer by night Charles Ives’s vast output has been gradually bringing to him recognition from
(D)Doing business by day and
composing music by night , Charles
Ives’s vast output has gradually brought him recognition for
(E) The vast output of
Charles Ives , businessman by day and
composer by night , has gradually brought him recognition as
9 . In most states where
local property taxes fund the public schools , communities with strong tax
bases from commercial property can support its schools while maintaining low
property tax rates .
(A)with strong tax bases from
commercial property can support its schools while maintaining low property tax
rates .
(B)that have strong tax bases
from commercial property can support their schools and maintaining low property
tax rates .
(C)with strong tax bases from
commercial property could have supported its schools while maintaining low
property tax rates .
(D)with strong tax bases from
commercial property can support their schools while maintaining low property
tax rates .
(E)with strong tax bases from
commercial property could of supported its schools and the maintenance of low
property tax rates .
10 . The author has given us
a well-written , thoughtful , and at times she is even colorful in her
examination of one of the perennial dilemmas of contemporary life .
(A) thoughtful , and at times
she is even colorful in her examination of
(B) thoughtful , and even at
times she is colorful examining
(C) thoughtful ; and at times
she is even colorful examining
(D) thoughtful , and at times
even colorful examination of
(E) thoughtful , or at times
is even colorful when she examines
11. James had initially
derided the physical education requirement at his school , then eventually
he was convinced of the value of exercising regularly .
(A) school , then eventually
he was convinced of the value
(B) school , then eventually
the value convinced him
(C) school , but eventually
he was convinced of the value
(D) school : and eventually
he was convinced of the value
(E) school ; however,
eventually being convinced of the value
12 . The drop in interest
rates , especially for home mortgages , have encouraged prospective buyers
and applied for loans .
(A) have encouraged
prospective buyers and applied for loans .
(B) have encouraged
prospective buyers and loans have been applied for .
(C) have encouraged
prospective buyers : therefore , they applied for loans .
(D) has encouraged prospective
buyers that they applied for loans .
(E) has encouraged
prospective buyers t apply for loans .
13 . The bridge between San
Francisco and Man County , California , is actually painted a reddish orange ,
while being called the Golden Gate .
(A) is actually painted a
reddish orange , while being
(B) although actually painted
a reddish orange is
(C) whose paint is actually a reddish orange , while it
is
(D) being actually painted a
reddish orange caused it to be
(E) which is actually painted
a reddish orange , while being
14 . Fans of Donald Trump’s
reality television show The Apprentice have described it as
simultaneously infuriating because of Trump’s arrogance but Trump’s shrewdness
still has a fascination .
(A) but Trump’s shrewdness
still has a fascination
(B) and Trump’s shrewdness
still is fascinating
(C) and Trump is fascinatingly shrewd
(D) and fascinating because
of Trump’s shrewdness
(E) while Trump is so shrewd
that he fascinates them