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2 - ] SAT - Common Problems In Grammar And Usage

2 - ] SAT - Common Problems In Grammar And Usage

 

The sentences in this section may contain errors in grammar , usage , choice of words , or idioms. Either there is just one error in a sentence or the sentence is correct . Some words or phrases  are underlined and lettered ; everything else in the sentence is correct.

    If an underlined word or phrase is incorrect , choose that letter ; if the sentence is correct , select No error . Then blacken the appropriate space on your answer sheet .

Example :

The region has a climate so severe that plants growing there rarely had been more than

                                                     A                                  B                           C

twelve inches high . No error

                         D         E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

We were already to leave for the amusement park when John’s car broke down ; we were

                   A               B                                                                                     C                   D

forced to postpone our outing . No error

                                                           E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

2. By order of the Student Council , the wearing of slacks by we girls in school has been

        A                                                              B                             C                              D

 permitted . No error

                          E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

3 . Each one of the dogs in the show require a special kind of diet . No error

       A                                                         B            C         D                       E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

4 . The major difficulty confronting the authorities was the reluctance of the people to talk

                                               A                                        B                                                     C

; they has been warned not to say nothing to the police . No error

                                                          D                                       E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

5. If I were you , I would permit him to take part in such an exhausting and painful

             A                                          B            C                                            D

 activity. No error

                     E 

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

6 . Stanford White , who is one of America’s most notable architects , have designed many

                                    A                                              B                                         C

famous buildings , among them the original Madison Square Garden . No error

                                          D                                                                                 E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

7 . The notion of allowing the institution of  slavery to continue to  exist in a democratic

                             A                             B                                    C

 society had no appeal to either the violent followers of John Brown nor the peaceful

                                                                                                                      D

disciples of Sojourner Truth . No error

                                                         E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

8 . Some students prefer watching filmstrips to textbooks because they feel uncomfortable

                                   A                                                 B                                                C

 with  the presentation of information in a non-oral form . No error

                                        D                                                              E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

9 . There was so much conversation in back of me that I couldn’t hear the actors on the

        A                                                         B                 C           D

 stage . No error

                  E

 (A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

 

10 . This book is too; it can help neither you nor I . No error

                              A         B                                 C  D       E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

11 . In a way we may say that we have reached  the end of the Industrial Revolution .

                        A                   B                  C                    D

No error

       E

12 . Although the books are altogether on the shelf , they are not arranged in any kind of

                A                                      B                               C                                             D

order . No error

                  E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

13 . The reason for my prolonged absence from class was because I was ill for three weeks .

                     A                              B                                    C        D  

No error

      E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

14 . According to  researchers , the weapons and work implements used by Cro-Magnon

                A                                                                                                  B

 hunters appear being actually quite  “modern .” No error

                               C           D                                          E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

15 . Since we were caught completely unawares , the affect of Ms. Rivera’s remarks was

                                                              A                            B                                                  C

startling ; some were shocked , but others were angry . No error

                                                       D                                           E   

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

16 . The committee had intended both you and I to speak at the assembly ; however , only

                                          A                            B                                                        C            D                             

one of us will be able to talk . No error

                                                         D

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

17 . The existence of rundown “welfare hotels” in which homeless families reside at

                                                                                       A                                        B

enormous cost to the taxpayer provides a shameful commentary of  America’s commitment

                      C                                                                        D

to house the poor . No error .

                                       E          

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

18 . We have heard that the principal has decided whom the prize winners will be  and will

                                                       A                                B                                          C     D

announce the names in the assembly today . No error

                                                                                  E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

19 . As soon as the sun had rose  over the mountains , the valley became unbearably hot

             A                             B           C                                                                       D

and stifling . No error

                            E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

20 . They are both excellent books , but this one is best . No error

           A                               B                                  C   D           E   

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

21 . Although the news had come as a surprise to all in the room , both Jane and Oprah

                                                A                                B

tried to do her work as though nothing had happened . No error

                     C                  D                                                         E  

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

22 . Even well-known fashion designers have difficulty staying on top from one season to

          A                                                                                                                       B

 another  because of  changeable moods and needs in the marketplace . No error

                     C                        D                                                                            E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

23 . Arms control has been under discussion for decades with the former Soviet Union , but

                                                             A                                                                                        B

solutions are still alluding the major powers . No error

                     C           D                                              E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

24 . Perhaps sports enthusiasts are realizing that jogging is not easy on joints and tendons ,

                                                                              A                           B            

for the latest fad is being walking . No error

                 C                      D                     E 

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

25 . Technological advances can cause factual data to become obsolete within a short time ;

                                                        A                                                                                   B

yet , students should concentrate on reasoning skills , not facts . No error

  C                                                                   D                                       E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

26 . If anyone cares to join me in this campaign , either now or in the near future , they will

        A                             B                                            C                                                     D

be welcomed gratefully . No error

                                                  E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

27 . The poems with which he occasionally desired to regale the fashionable world were

                                    A                                                B  

invariably bad -- stereotyped , bombastic , and even ludicrous . No error

          C                                                                              D                     E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

28 . Ever since the quality of teacher education came under public scrutiny , suggestions for

               A                     B

upgrading the profession are abounding . No error

         C                                           D                    E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

29 . Because the door was locked , the police were forced to break into the apartment

             A                                                                B                     C

through the bedroom window . No error

      D                                                   E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

30 . I will always remember you standing by me offering me encouragement . No error

            A      B                          C         D                                                                         E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

31 . With special training , capuchin monkeys can enable quadriplegics as well as  other

                                                                                       A                                       B

handicapped individuals to become increasing independent . No error

                                                    C                        D                            E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

32 . Contrary to  what had previously been reported , the conditions governing  the truce

               A                                                                                                          B

between Libya and Chad arranged by the United Nations has not yet been revealed .

                                                      C                                            D

No error

      E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

33 . Avid readers generally either admire or dislike Ernest Hemingway’s journalistic style

                                                                        A                                                                         B

of writing ; few have no opinion of him  . No error

                          C                               D              E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

34 In 1986 , the nuclear disaster at Chernobyl has aroused intense speculation about the

                                                                                          A                                            B

long-term effects of radiation that continued for the better part of  a year . No error

                       C                                                                        D                                  E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

35 . Howard Hughes , who became the subject for bizarre rumors as a result of his extreme

                                         A       B                                                                      C

reclusiveness , was well-known as an aviator , industrialist , and in producing motion

                                                                                                                             D

pictures  . No error

                        E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

Some or all parts of the following sentences are underlined . The first answer choice . (A) , simply repeats the underlined part of the sentence . The other four choices present four alternative ways to phrase the underlined part . Select the answer that produces the most effective sentence , one that is clear and exact , and blacken the appropriate space on your answer sheet . In selecting your choice , be sure that it is standard written English , and that it expresses the meaning of the original sentence

example :

The first biography of author Eudora Welty came out in 1998 and she was 89 years old at the time 

(A) and she was 89 years old at the time .

(B) at the time when she was 89

(C) upon becoming an 89 year old

(D) when she was 89

(E) at the age of 89 years old

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

36 . The child is neither encouraged to be critical or to examine all the evidence before forming an opinion .

(A) neither encouraged to be critical or to examine

(B) neither encouraged to be critical nor to examine

(C) either encouraged to be critical or to examine

(D) encouraged either to be critical or to examine

(E) not encouraged either to be critical or to examine

37 . The process by which the community influence the actions of its members is known as social control .

(A) influence the actions of its members

(B) influences the actions of its members

(C) had influenced the actions of its members

(D) influences the actions of their members

(E) will influence the actions of its members

38 . Play being recognized as an important factor improving mental and physical health and thereby reducing human misery and poverty .

(A) Play being recognized

(B) By recognizing play as

(C) Their recognizing play as

(D) Recognition of it being

(E) Play is recognized as

39 . To be sure , there would be scarcely any time left over for other things if school children would have been expected to have considered all sides of every matter , on which they hold opinions .

(A) would have been expected to have considered

(B) should have been expected to have considered

(C) were expected to consider

(D) will be expected to have considered

(E) were  expected to be considered

40 . Using it wisely , leisure promotes health , efficiency and happiness .

(A) Using it wisely

(B) If is used wisely

(C) Having used it wisely

(D) Because of its wise use

(E) Because of usefulness

41 . In giving expression to the play instincts of the human race , new vigor and effectiveness are afforded by recreation to the body and to the mind .  

(A) new vigor and effectiveness are afforded by recreation to the body and to the mind  

(B) recreation affords new vigor and effectiveness to the body and to the mind  

(C) there are afforded new vigor and effectiveness to the body and to the mind  

(D) by recreation the body and the mind are afforded new vigor and effectiveness

(E) to the body and to the mind afford new vigor and effectiveness to themselves by recreation

42 . Depending on skillful suggestion , argument is seldom used in advertising .

(A) Depending on skillful suggestion , argument is seldom used in advertising .

(B) Argument is seldom used in advertising , which depends instead on skillful suggestion .

(C) Skillful suggestion is depended on by advertisers instead of argument .

(D) Depending on skillful suggestion , argument is seldom used in advertising .

(E) Depending on skillful suggestion , argument is seldom used in advertising .

43 . When this war is over , no nation will either be isolated in war or peace .

(A) either be isolated in war or peace

(B) be either isolated in war or peace

(C) be isolated in neither war nor peace

(D) be isolated either in war or peace

(E) be isolated neither in war or peace

44 . Thanks to the prevailing westerly winds , dust blowing east from the drought-stricken plains travels halfway across the continent to fall on the cities of East Coast .

(A) blowing east from the drought-stricken plains

(B) that , blowing east from the drought-stricken plains

(C) from the drought-stricken plains and blows east

(D) that is from the drought-stricken plains blowing east

(E) blowing east that is from the plains that are drought-stricken

45 . Americans are learning that their concept of a research worker toiling alone in a laboratory and who discovers miraculous cures has been highly idealized and glamorized .

(A) toiling alone in a laboratory and who discovers miraculous cures

(B) toiling alone in a laboratory and discovers miraculous cures

(C) toiling alone in a laboratory to discover miraculous cures

(D) who toil alone in the  laboratory and discover miraculous cures

(E) has toiled alone hoping to discover miraculous cures

46 . However many mistakes have been made in our past , the tradition of America , not only the champion of freedom but also fair play , still lives among millions who can see light and hope scarcely anywhere else .

(A) not only the champion of freedom but also fair play

(B) the champion of not only freedom but also fair play

(C) the champion not only of freedom but also fair play

(D) not only the champion but also freedom and fair play

(E) not the champion of freedom only , but also fair play

47 . Examining the principal movements sweeping through the world , it can be seen

(A) Examining the principal movements sweeping through the world , it can be seen

(B) Having examined the principal movements sweeping through the world , it can be seen

(C) Examining the principal movements sweeping through the world can be seen

(D) Examining the principal movements sweeping through the world , we can see

(E) It can be seen examining the principal movements sweeping through the world ,

48 . The PCC is broadening its view on what constitutes indecent programming

(A) The PCC is broadening its view on what constitutes indecent programming

(B) The PCC , broadening its view on what constitutes indecent programming , has caused

(C) The PCC is broadening its view on what constitutes indecent programming , as a result

(D) Since the PCC is broadening its view on what constitutes indecent programming

(E) The PCC , having broadened its view on what constitutes indecent programming

49 . As district attorney , Elizabeth Holtzman not only had the responsibility of supervising a staff of dedicated young lawyers but she had the task of maintaining good relations with the police also  .

(A) but she had the task of maintaining good relations with the police also 

(B) but she also  had the task of maintaining good relations with the police

(C) but also had the task of maintaining good relations with the police

(D) but she had the task to maintain good relations with the police also 

(E) but also she had the task to maintain good relations with the police 

50 . Many politicians are now trying to take uncontroversial positions on issues ; the purpose being to allow them to appeal to as wide a segment of the voting population as possible .

(A) issues ; the purpose being to allow them to appeal

(B) issues in order to appeal

(C) issues , the purpose is to allow them to appeal

(D) issues and the purpose is to allow them to appeal

(E) issues ; that was allowing them to appeal

The passage below is the unedited draft of a student’s essay . Parts of the essay need to be rewritten to make the meaning clearer and more precise . Read the essay carefully .

  The essay is followed by six questions about changes that might improve all or part of the organization , development , sentence structure , use of standard written English . In each case , choose the answer that most clearly and effectively expresses the student’s intended meaning . Indicate your choice by blackening the corresponding space on the answer sheet .

[1] Throughout history , people have speculated about the future . [2] Will it be a utopia ? they wondered .[3] Will injustice and poverty be eliminated ? [4] Will people accept ethnic diversity ,learning to live in peace ? [5] Will the world be clean and unpolluted ? [6] Or will technology aid us in creating a trap for ourselves we cannot escape , for example such as the world in 1984 ? [7With the turn of the millennium just around the corner these questions are in the back of our minds .

            [8] Science fiction often portrays the future as a technological Garden of Eden . [9] With interactive computers , TVs and robots at our demand , we barely need to lift a finger to go to school , to work , to go shopping , and education is also easy and convenient . [10] Yet , the problems of the real twentieth century seem to point in another direction . [11] The environment , far from improving , keeps deteriorating . [12] Wars and other civil conflicts breakout regularly . [13]The world’s population is growing out of control . [14] The majority of people on earth live in poverty . [15] Many of them are starving . [16] Illiteracy is a problem in most poor countries . [17] Diseases and malnourishment is very common .[18] Rich countries like the U.S.A. don’t have the resources to help the “have-not” countries .

19] I, think  instead of all the silly inventions such as tablets you put in your toilet tank to make the water blue ,or electric toothbrushes . [20] More money is spent on space and defense than on education and health care . [21] Advancements in agriculture can produce enough food to feed the whole country , yet people in the U.S. are starving .

[22] Although the USSR is gone , the nuclear threat continues from small countries like Israel , North Korea , and Iran [23] Until the world puts its priorities straight , we can’t look for a bright future in the twenty-first century ,despite the rosy picture painted for us by the science fiction writers .

51. In the context of paragraph 1 , which of the following is the best revision of sentence 6 ?

A) Or will technology create a trap for ourselves from which we cannot escape , for example the world in 1984 ?

(B) Or will technology aid people in creating a trap for themselves that they cannot escape ; for example , the world in 1984 ?

(C) Or will technology create a trap from which there is no escape , as it did in the world in 1984 ?

(D) Or will technology trap us in an inescapable world , for example , it did so in the world of 1984 ?

(E) Perhaps technology will aid people in creating a trap for themselves from which they cannot escape , just as they did it in the world of 1984 .

52 . With regard to the essay as a whole , which of the following best describes the writer’s intention in paragraph 1 ?

(A) To announce the purpose of the essay

(B) To compare two ideas discussed later in the essay

(C) To take a position on the essay’s main issue

(D) To reveal the organization of the essay

(E) To raise questions that will be answered in the essay

53 . Which of the following is the best revision of the underlined segment of sentence 9 below ?

[9] With interactive computers , TVs and robots at our demand , we barely need to lift a finger to go to school , to work , to go shopping , and education is also easy and convenient .

(A) and to go shopping , while education is also easy and convenient

(B) to go shopping , and getting an education is also easy and convenient

(C) to go shopping as well as educating ourselves are all easy and convenient

(D) to shop , and an easy and convenient education

(E) to shop , and to get an easy and convenient education

54 . Which of the following is the most effective way to combine sentences 14 , 15 , 16 , and 17 ?

(A) The majority of people on earth are living in poverty and are starving , with illiteracy , and disease and being malnourished are also a common problems

(B) Common problems for the majority of people on earth are poverty , illiteracy , diseases , malnourishment , and many are illiterate .

(C) The majority of people on earth are poor , starving , sick , malnourished and illiterate .

(D) Common among the poor majority on earth is poverty , starvation , disease , malnourishment , and illiteracy .

(E) The majority of the earth’s people living in poverty with starvation , disease , malnourishment and illiteracy a constant threat .

55 . In the context of the sentence 19 , which of the following is the most effective revision of sentence 19 ?

(A) Instead they are devoting resources on silly inventions such as tablets to make toilet tank water blue or electric toothbrushes

(B) Instead , they waste their resources on producing silly inventions like electric toothbrushes and tablets for bluing toilet tank water .

(C) Think of all silly inventions : tablets you put in your toilet tank to make the water blue and electric toothbrushes .

(D) Instead , tablets you put in your toilet tank to make the water blue or electric toothbrushes are examples of useless products on the market today .

(E) Instead of spending on useful things , think of all the silly inventions such as tablets you put in your toilet tank to make the water blue or electric toothbrushes .

56 .Which of the following revisions would most improve the overall coherence of the essay?

(A) Move sentence 7 to paragraph 2

(B) Move sentence 10 to paragraph 1

(C) Move sentence 22 to paragraph 2

(D) Delete sentence 8

(E) Delete sentence 23

Answer Key

1 . (A) 2 . (C) 3 .  (B) 4 . (D) 5 . (E) 6 . (C) 7 . (D) 8 .  (B) 9 . (B) 10 . (E) 11 . (E) 12 . (B)

13 . (D)  14 . (C) 15 . (B) 16 . (B)  17 . (D) 18 . (B) 19 . (B) 20 .  (D) 21 . (C) 22 . (E) 23 . (D)

24 . (D) 25 . (C) 26 . (D) 27 . (E) 28 . (D) 29 . (E) 30 . (C) 31 . (E) 32 . (D) 33 . (D) 34 . (A)

35 .  (D) 36 . (E) 37 . (B) 38 . (E) 39 . (C) 40 . (B) 41 . (B) 42 . (B)  43 . (D) 44 . (A) 45 . (C)

46 . (C) 47 . (D) 48 . (D) 49. (C) 50 . (B) 51 . (C) 52 . (E) 53 . (E) 54 . (C) 55 . (B) 56 . (C)


1 - ] SAT - Common Problems In Grammar And Usage

1- ] SAT - Common Problems In Grammar And Usage

 

Common Problems in Grammar

Grammar Fragments

What is a sentence fragment ? A sentence fragment is a broken chunk of sentence in need of fixing . The poor fractured thing can’t stand alone . We’ll look at some broken sentences and fix them too .

Here are the fragments . Let’s examine them one at a time .

When the troll bounced off the banister

Muttering over the cauldron

To harvest mandrakes nocturnally

In our preparation of the purple potion

Or lurk beneath the balustrade

We feel something missing in them . They do not give you a complete meaning .

Here are a couple of ways to correct this fragment . You can simply chop off the subordinating conjunction when , leaving yourself with a simple sentence :

1 . The troll bounced off the banister .

2 . The witch is muttering over the cauldron .

3 . Harvest mandrakes nocturnally ! ( the infinitive phrase is turned into a command )

You can provide a simple subject and complete the verb .

- We will harvest mandrakes nocturnally .

You can treat the phrase as the subject of your sentence and add a predicate .

2 . Muttering over the cauldron is a bad habit that good witches should avoid .

- Muttering over the cauldron , the witch failed to enunciate the incantation clearly .

You can also provide the dependent clause ( or the infinitive phrase ) with an independent clause to lean on :

1 . When the troll bounced off the banister , he bowled over the professor of  herbology .

- The little wizards laughed to see such sport when the troll bounced off the banister .

To harvest mandrakes nocturnally is a task that only a fearless junior wizard would undertake .

- To harvest mandrakes nocturnally , you must wait for a completely moonless night .

The next to last sentence fragment is a participial phrase .

To fix it , you can provide a simple subject and create a verb .

We prepared the purple potion .

He lurked beneath the balustrade .

You can assume an implicit subject (you) and turn it into a command :

Prepare the purple potion !

Lurk beneath the balustrade !

Common Grammar and Usage Errors .

Some errors are more common than others . Here are a dozen that appear frequently on the examination . Watch out for them when you do the practice exercises and when you take the SAT .

1 . The Run-On Sentence

Mary’s party was very exciting ,it lasted until 2 A.M.

It is raining today , I need a raincoat .

You may also have heard this error called a comma splice . It can be connected by making two sentences instead of one :

Mary’s party was very exciting . It lasted until 2 .A.M .

or by using a semicolon in place of the comma :

Mary’s party was very exciting ; It lasted until 2 A.M .

or by proper compounding :

Mary’s party was very exciting and lasted until 2 A.M.

You can also correct this error with proper subordination .

The second example above could be corrected :

Since it is raining today , I need a raincoat .

It is raining today , so I need a raincoat .

2 . The Sentence Fragment

Since John was talking during the entire class , making it impossible for anyone to concentrate .

This is the opposite of the first error , instead of too much in one sentence , here you have too little . Do not be misled by the length of the fragment . It must have a main clause before it can be a complete sentence . All you have in this example is the clause . You still need a result . For example , the sentence could be corrected .

Since John was talking during the entire class , making it impossible for anyone to concentrate , the teacher made him sty after school .

3. Error in the Case of a Noun or Pronoun

Between you and I , this test is not really very difficult .

Case problems usually involve personal pronouns , which are in the nominative case ( I , he , she , we , they , who ) when they are used as subject or predicate nominatives , and in the subject case ( me , him , her , us , them , whom ) when they are used as direct objects , indirect objects , and objects of prepositions . In this example , if you realize that between is a preposition , you know that “I” should be changed to the objective “me” because it is the subject of a preposition .

4 . Error in Subject-Verb Agreement

Harvard College , along with several other Ivy League schools , are sending students to the conference .

Phrases starting with “along with” or “as well as “ or “ in addition to” that are placed in between the subject and the verb do not affect the verb . The subject of this sentence is Harvard College , so the verb should be “is sending” .

There is three bears living in that house .

Sentences that begin with “there” almost always have the subject after the verb . The subject of this sentence is “bears” , so the verb should be “are” .

5 . Error in Pronoun-Number Agreement

Every one of the girls on the team is trying to do their best .

Every pronoun must have a specific noun or noun substitute for an antecedent , and it must agree with that antecedent in number ( singular or plural ) . In this example , “their” refers to one and must be singular :

Every one of the girls on the team is trying to do her best .

6 . Error in the Tense or Form of a Verb

After the sun set behind the mountain , a cool breeze sprang up and brought relief from the heat .

Make sure the verbs in a sentence appear in the proper sequence of tenses , so that it is clear what happened when . Since , according to the sentence , the breeze did not appear until after the sun had finished setting , the setting belongs in the past perfect tense :

After the sun had set behind the mountain , a cool breeze sprang up and brought relief from the heat .

7. Error in Logical Comparison

I can go to California or Florida . I wonder which is best .

When you are comparing only two things , you should use the comparative form of the adjective , not the superlative :

I wonder which is better .

Comparisons must also be complete and logical .  

The room on the second floor are larger than the first floor .

It would be a strange building that had rooms larger than an entire floor . Logically , this sentence should be corrected to :

The rooms on the second floor are larger than those on the first floor .

8 . Adjective and Adverb Confusion

She did good on the test .

They felt badly about leaving their friends .

These are the two most common ways that adjectives and adverbs are misused . In the first example , when you are talking about how someone did , you want the adverb “well” , not the adjective “good” :

She did well on the test .

In the second example , after a linking verb like “feel” you want a predicate adjective to describe the subject :

They felt bad about leaving their friends .

8 . Error in Modification and Word Order

Reading for the book , the ladder slipped out from under him .

A participial phrase at the beginning of the sentence should describe the subject of the sentence . Since it doesn’t make sense to think of a ladder reaching for a book , this participle is left dangling with nothing to modify . The sentence needs some rewriting :

When he reached for the book , the ladder slipped out from under him .   

9 . Error in Parallelism

In his book on winter sports , the author discusses ice-skating , skiing , hockey , and how to fish in an ice-covered lake .

Logically , equal and similar ideas belong in similar form . This shows that they are equal . In this sentence , the author discusses four sports , and all four should be presented the same way :

In his book on winter sports , the author discusses ice skating , skiing , hockey , and fishing in an ice-covered lake .

Error in Diction or Idiom

The affects of the storm could be seen everywhere .

Your ear for the language will help you handle these errors , especially if you are accustomed to reading standard English . These questions test you on words that are frequently misused , on levels of usage ( informal versus formal ) , and on standard English idioms . In this example , the verb “affect” meaning “to influence” has been confused with the noun “effect” , meaning “result”. 

The effects of the storm could be seen everywhere .

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