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2 - ] SAT - Common Problems In Grammar And Usage

2 - ] SAT - Common Problems In Grammar And Usage

 

The sentences in this section may contain errors in grammar , usage , choice of words , or idioms. Either there is just one error in a sentence or the sentence is correct . Some words or phrases  are underlined and lettered ; everything else in the sentence is correct.

    If an underlined word or phrase is incorrect , choose that letter ; if the sentence is correct , select No error . Then blacken the appropriate space on your answer sheet .

Example :

The region has a climate so severe that plants growing there rarely had been more than

                                                     A                                  B                           C

twelve inches high . No error

                         D         E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

We were already to leave for the amusement park when John’s car broke down ; we were

                   A               B                                                                                     C                   D

forced to postpone our outing . No error

                                                           E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

2. By order of the Student Council , the wearing of slacks by we girls in school has been

        A                                                              B                             C                              D

 permitted . No error

                          E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

3 . Each one of the dogs in the show require a special kind of diet . No error

       A                                                         B            C         D                       E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

4 . The major difficulty confronting the authorities was the reluctance of the people to talk

                                               A                                        B                                                     C

; they has been warned not to say nothing to the police . No error

                                                          D                                       E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

5. If I were you , I would permit him to take part in such an exhausting and painful

             A                                          B            C                                            D

 activity. No error

                     E 

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

6 . Stanford White , who is one of America’s most notable architects , have designed many

                                    A                                              B                                         C

famous buildings , among them the original Madison Square Garden . No error

                                          D                                                                                 E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

7 . The notion of allowing the institution of  slavery to continue to  exist in a democratic

                             A                             B                                    C

 society had no appeal to either the violent followers of John Brown nor the peaceful

                                                                                                                      D

disciples of Sojourner Truth . No error

                                                         E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

8 . Some students prefer watching filmstrips to textbooks because they feel uncomfortable

                                   A                                                 B                                                C

 with  the presentation of information in a non-oral form . No error

                                        D                                                              E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

9 . There was so much conversation in back of me that I couldn’t hear the actors on the

        A                                                         B                 C           D

 stage . No error

                  E

 (A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

 

10 . This book is too; it can help neither you nor I . No error

                              A         B                                 C  D       E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

11 . In a way we may say that we have reached  the end of the Industrial Revolution .

                        A                   B                  C                    D

No error

       E

12 . Although the books are altogether on the shelf , they are not arranged in any kind of

                A                                      B                               C                                             D

order . No error

                  E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

13 . The reason for my prolonged absence from class was because I was ill for three weeks .

                     A                              B                                    C        D  

No error

      E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

14 . According to  researchers , the weapons and work implements used by Cro-Magnon

                A                                                                                                  B

 hunters appear being actually quite  “modern .” No error

                               C           D                                          E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

15 . Since we were caught completely unawares , the affect of Ms. Rivera’s remarks was

                                                              A                            B                                                  C

startling ; some were shocked , but others were angry . No error

                                                       D                                           E   

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

16 . The committee had intended both you and I to speak at the assembly ; however , only

                                          A                            B                                                        C            D                             

one of us will be able to talk . No error

                                                         D

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

17 . The existence of rundown “welfare hotels” in which homeless families reside at

                                                                                       A                                        B

enormous cost to the taxpayer provides a shameful commentary of  America’s commitment

                      C                                                                        D

to house the poor . No error .

                                       E          

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

18 . We have heard that the principal has decided whom the prize winners will be  and will

                                                       A                                B                                          C     D

announce the names in the assembly today . No error

                                                                                  E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

19 . As soon as the sun had rose  over the mountains , the valley became unbearably hot

             A                             B           C                                                                       D

and stifling . No error

                            E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

20 . They are both excellent books , but this one is best . No error

           A                               B                                  C   D           E   

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

21 . Although the news had come as a surprise to all in the room , both Jane and Oprah

                                                A                                B

tried to do her work as though nothing had happened . No error

                     C                  D                                                         E  

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

22 . Even well-known fashion designers have difficulty staying on top from one season to

          A                                                                                                                       B

 another  because of  changeable moods and needs in the marketplace . No error

                     C                        D                                                                            E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

23 . Arms control has been under discussion for decades with the former Soviet Union , but

                                                             A                                                                                        B

solutions are still alluding the major powers . No error

                     C           D                                              E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

24 . Perhaps sports enthusiasts are realizing that jogging is not easy on joints and tendons ,

                                                                              A                           B            

for the latest fad is being walking . No error

                 C                      D                     E 

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

25 . Technological advances can cause factual data to become obsolete within a short time ;

                                                        A                                                                                   B

yet , students should concentrate on reasoning skills , not facts . No error

  C                                                                   D                                       E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

26 . If anyone cares to join me in this campaign , either now or in the near future , they will

        A                             B                                            C                                                     D

be welcomed gratefully . No error

                                                  E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

27 . The poems with which he occasionally desired to regale the fashionable world were

                                    A                                                B  

invariably bad -- stereotyped , bombastic , and even ludicrous . No error

          C                                                                              D                     E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

28 . Ever since the quality of teacher education came under public scrutiny , suggestions for

               A                     B

upgrading the profession are abounding . No error

         C                                           D                    E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

29 . Because the door was locked , the police were forced to break into the apartment

             A                                                                B                     C

through the bedroom window . No error

      D                                                   E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

30 . I will always remember you standing by me offering me encouragement . No error

            A      B                          C         D                                                                         E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

31 . With special training , capuchin monkeys can enable quadriplegics as well as  other

                                                                                       A                                       B

handicapped individuals to become increasing independent . No error

                                                    C                        D                            E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

32 . Contrary to  what had previously been reported , the conditions governing  the truce

               A                                                                                                          B

between Libya and Chad arranged by the United Nations has not yet been revealed .

                                                      C                                            D

No error

      E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

33 . Avid readers generally either admire or dislike Ernest Hemingway’s journalistic style

                                                                        A                                                                         B

of writing ; few have no opinion of him  . No error

                          C                               D              E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

34 In 1986 , the nuclear disaster at Chernobyl has aroused intense speculation about the

                                                                                          A                                            B

long-term effects of radiation that continued for the better part of  a year . No error

                       C                                                                        D                                  E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

35 . Howard Hughes , who became the subject for bizarre rumors as a result of his extreme

                                         A       B                                                                      C

reclusiveness , was well-known as an aviator , industrialist , and in producing motion

                                                                                                                             D

pictures  . No error

                        E

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

Some or all parts of the following sentences are underlined . The first answer choice . (A) , simply repeats the underlined part of the sentence . The other four choices present four alternative ways to phrase the underlined part . Select the answer that produces the most effective sentence , one that is clear and exact , and blacken the appropriate space on your answer sheet . In selecting your choice , be sure that it is standard written English , and that it expresses the meaning of the original sentence

example :

The first biography of author Eudora Welty came out in 1998 and she was 89 years old at the time 

(A) and she was 89 years old at the time .

(B) at the time when she was 89

(C) upon becoming an 89 year old

(D) when she was 89

(E) at the age of 89 years old

(A) (B) (C) (D) (E)

36 . The child is neither encouraged to be critical or to examine all the evidence before forming an opinion .

(A) neither encouraged to be critical or to examine

(B) neither encouraged to be critical nor to examine

(C) either encouraged to be critical or to examine

(D) encouraged either to be critical or to examine

(E) not encouraged either to be critical or to examine

37 . The process by which the community influence the actions of its members is known as social control .

(A) influence the actions of its members

(B) influences the actions of its members

(C) had influenced the actions of its members

(D) influences the actions of their members

(E) will influence the actions of its members

38 . Play being recognized as an important factor improving mental and physical health and thereby reducing human misery and poverty .

(A) Play being recognized

(B) By recognizing play as

(C) Their recognizing play as

(D) Recognition of it being

(E) Play is recognized as

39 . To be sure , there would be scarcely any time left over for other things if school children would have been expected to have considered all sides of every matter , on which they hold opinions .

(A) would have been expected to have considered

(B) should have been expected to have considered

(C) were expected to consider

(D) will be expected to have considered

(E) were  expected to be considered

40 . Using it wisely , leisure promotes health , efficiency and happiness .

(A) Using it wisely

(B) If is used wisely

(C) Having used it wisely

(D) Because of its wise use

(E) Because of usefulness

41 . In giving expression to the play instincts of the human race , new vigor and effectiveness are afforded by recreation to the body and to the mind .  

(A) new vigor and effectiveness are afforded by recreation to the body and to the mind  

(B) recreation affords new vigor and effectiveness to the body and to the mind  

(C) there are afforded new vigor and effectiveness to the body and to the mind  

(D) by recreation the body and the mind are afforded new vigor and effectiveness

(E) to the body and to the mind afford new vigor and effectiveness to themselves by recreation

42 . Depending on skillful suggestion , argument is seldom used in advertising .

(A) Depending on skillful suggestion , argument is seldom used in advertising .

(B) Argument is seldom used in advertising , which depends instead on skillful suggestion .

(C) Skillful suggestion is depended on by advertisers instead of argument .

(D) Depending on skillful suggestion , argument is seldom used in advertising .

(E) Depending on skillful suggestion , argument is seldom used in advertising .

43 . When this war is over , no nation will either be isolated in war or peace .

(A) either be isolated in war or peace

(B) be either isolated in war or peace

(C) be isolated in neither war nor peace

(D) be isolated either in war or peace

(E) be isolated neither in war or peace

44 . Thanks to the prevailing westerly winds , dust blowing east from the drought-stricken plains travels halfway across the continent to fall on the cities of East Coast .

(A) blowing east from the drought-stricken plains

(B) that , blowing east from the drought-stricken plains

(C) from the drought-stricken plains and blows east

(D) that is from the drought-stricken plains blowing east

(E) blowing east that is from the plains that are drought-stricken

45 . Americans are learning that their concept of a research worker toiling alone in a laboratory and who discovers miraculous cures has been highly idealized and glamorized .

(A) toiling alone in a laboratory and who discovers miraculous cures

(B) toiling alone in a laboratory and discovers miraculous cures

(C) toiling alone in a laboratory to discover miraculous cures

(D) who toil alone in the  laboratory and discover miraculous cures

(E) has toiled alone hoping to discover miraculous cures

46 . However many mistakes have been made in our past , the tradition of America , not only the champion of freedom but also fair play , still lives among millions who can see light and hope scarcely anywhere else .

(A) not only the champion of freedom but also fair play

(B) the champion of not only freedom but also fair play

(C) the champion not only of freedom but also fair play

(D) not only the champion but also freedom and fair play

(E) not the champion of freedom only , but also fair play

47 . Examining the principal movements sweeping through the world , it can be seen

(A) Examining the principal movements sweeping through the world , it can be seen

(B) Having examined the principal movements sweeping through the world , it can be seen

(C) Examining the principal movements sweeping through the world can be seen

(D) Examining the principal movements sweeping through the world , we can see

(E) It can be seen examining the principal movements sweeping through the world ,

48 . The PCC is broadening its view on what constitutes indecent programming

(A) The PCC is broadening its view on what constitutes indecent programming

(B) The PCC , broadening its view on what constitutes indecent programming , has caused

(C) The PCC is broadening its view on what constitutes indecent programming , as a result

(D) Since the PCC is broadening its view on what constitutes indecent programming

(E) The PCC , having broadened its view on what constitutes indecent programming

49 . As district attorney , Elizabeth Holtzman not only had the responsibility of supervising a staff of dedicated young lawyers but she had the task of maintaining good relations with the police also  .

(A) but she had the task of maintaining good relations with the police also 

(B) but she also  had the task of maintaining good relations with the police

(C) but also had the task of maintaining good relations with the police

(D) but she had the task to maintain good relations with the police also 

(E) but also she had the task to maintain good relations with the police 

50 . Many politicians are now trying to take uncontroversial positions on issues ; the purpose being to allow them to appeal to as wide a segment of the voting population as possible .

(A) issues ; the purpose being to allow them to appeal

(B) issues in order to appeal

(C) issues , the purpose is to allow them to appeal

(D) issues and the purpose is to allow them to appeal

(E) issues ; that was allowing them to appeal

The passage below is the unedited draft of a student’s essay . Parts of the essay need to be rewritten to make the meaning clearer and more precise . Read the essay carefully .

  The essay is followed by six questions about changes that might improve all or part of the organization , development , sentence structure , use of standard written English . In each case , choose the answer that most clearly and effectively expresses the student’s intended meaning . Indicate your choice by blackening the corresponding space on the answer sheet .

[1] Throughout history , people have speculated about the future . [2] Will it be a utopia ? they wondered .[3] Will injustice and poverty be eliminated ? [4] Will people accept ethnic diversity ,learning to live in peace ? [5] Will the world be clean and unpolluted ? [6] Or will technology aid us in creating a trap for ourselves we cannot escape , for example such as the world in 1984 ? [7With the turn of the millennium just around the corner these questions are in the back of our minds .

            [8] Science fiction often portrays the future as a technological Garden of Eden . [9] With interactive computers , TVs and robots at our demand , we barely need to lift a finger to go to school , to work , to go shopping , and education is also easy and convenient . [10] Yet , the problems of the real twentieth century seem to point in another direction . [11] The environment , far from improving , keeps deteriorating . [12] Wars and other civil conflicts breakout regularly . [13]The world’s population is growing out of control . [14] The majority of people on earth live in poverty . [15] Many of them are starving . [16] Illiteracy is a problem in most poor countries . [17] Diseases and malnourishment is very common .[18] Rich countries like the U.S.A. don’t have the resources to help the “have-not” countries .

19] I, think  instead of all the silly inventions such as tablets you put in your toilet tank to make the water blue ,or electric toothbrushes . [20] More money is spent on space and defense than on education and health care . [21] Advancements in agriculture can produce enough food to feed the whole country , yet people in the U.S. are starving .

[22] Although the USSR is gone , the nuclear threat continues from small countries like Israel , North Korea , and Iran [23] Until the world puts its priorities straight , we can’t look for a bright future in the twenty-first century ,despite the rosy picture painted for us by the science fiction writers .

51. In the context of paragraph 1 , which of the following is the best revision of sentence 6 ?

A) Or will technology create a trap for ourselves from which we cannot escape , for example the world in 1984 ?

(B) Or will technology aid people in creating a trap for themselves that they cannot escape ; for example , the world in 1984 ?

(C) Or will technology create a trap from which there is no escape , as it did in the world in 1984 ?

(D) Or will technology trap us in an inescapable world , for example , it did so in the world of 1984 ?

(E) Perhaps technology will aid people in creating a trap for themselves from which they cannot escape , just as they did it in the world of 1984 .

52 . With regard to the essay as a whole , which of the following best describes the writer’s intention in paragraph 1 ?

(A) To announce the purpose of the essay

(B) To compare two ideas discussed later in the essay

(C) To take a position on the essay’s main issue

(D) To reveal the organization of the essay

(E) To raise questions that will be answered in the essay

53 . Which of the following is the best revision of the underlined segment of sentence 9 below ?

[9] With interactive computers , TVs and robots at our demand , we barely need to lift a finger to go to school , to work , to go shopping , and education is also easy and convenient .

(A) and to go shopping , while education is also easy and convenient

(B) to go shopping , and getting an education is also easy and convenient

(C) to go shopping as well as educating ourselves are all easy and convenient

(D) to shop , and an easy and convenient education

(E) to shop , and to get an easy and convenient education

54 . Which of the following is the most effective way to combine sentences 14 , 15 , 16 , and 17 ?

(A) The majority of people on earth are living in poverty and are starving , with illiteracy , and disease and being malnourished are also a common problems

(B) Common problems for the majority of people on earth are poverty , illiteracy , diseases , malnourishment , and many are illiterate .

(C) The majority of people on earth are poor , starving , sick , malnourished and illiterate .

(D) Common among the poor majority on earth is poverty , starvation , disease , malnourishment , and illiteracy .

(E) The majority of the earth’s people living in poverty with starvation , disease , malnourishment and illiteracy a constant threat .

55 . In the context of the sentence 19 , which of the following is the most effective revision of sentence 19 ?

(A) Instead they are devoting resources on silly inventions such as tablets to make toilet tank water blue or electric toothbrushes

(B) Instead , they waste their resources on producing silly inventions like electric toothbrushes and tablets for bluing toilet tank water .

(C) Think of all silly inventions : tablets you put in your toilet tank to make the water blue and electric toothbrushes .

(D) Instead , tablets you put in your toilet tank to make the water blue or electric toothbrushes are examples of useless products on the market today .

(E) Instead of spending on useful things , think of all the silly inventions such as tablets you put in your toilet tank to make the water blue or electric toothbrushes .

56 .Which of the following revisions would most improve the overall coherence of the essay?

(A) Move sentence 7 to paragraph 2

(B) Move sentence 10 to paragraph 1

(C) Move sentence 22 to paragraph 2

(D) Delete sentence 8

(E) Delete sentence 23

Answer Key

1 . (A) 2 . (C) 3 .  (B) 4 . (D) 5 . (E) 6 . (C) 7 . (D) 8 .  (B) 9 . (B) 10 . (E) 11 . (E) 12 . (B)

13 . (D)  14 . (C) 15 . (B) 16 . (B)  17 . (D) 18 . (B) 19 . (B) 20 .  (D) 21 . (C) 22 . (E) 23 . (D)

24 . (D) 25 . (C) 26 . (D) 27 . (E) 28 . (D) 29 . (E) 30 . (C) 31 . (E) 32 . (D) 33 . (D) 34 . (A)

35 .  (D) 36 . (E) 37 . (B) 38 . (E) 39 . (C) 40 . (B) 41 . (B) 42 . (B)  43 . (D) 44 . (A) 45 . (C)

46 . (C) 47 . (D) 48 . (D) 49. (C) 50 . (B) 51 . (C) 52 . (E) 53 . (E) 54 . (C) 55 . (B) 56 . (C)


1 - ] SAT - Common Problems In Grammar And Usage

1- ] SAT - Common Problems In Grammar And Usage

 

Common Problems in Grammar

Grammar Fragments

What is a sentence fragment ? A sentence fragment is a broken chunk of sentence in need of fixing . The poor fractured thing can’t stand alone . We’ll look at some broken sentences and fix them too .

Here are the fragments . Let’s examine them one at a time .

When the troll bounced off the banister

Muttering over the cauldron

To harvest mandrakes nocturnally

In our preparation of the purple potion

Or lurk beneath the balustrade

We feel something missing in them . They do not give you a complete meaning .

Here are a couple of ways to correct this fragment . You can simply chop off the subordinating conjunction when , leaving yourself with a simple sentence :

1 . The troll bounced off the banister .

2 . The witch is muttering over the cauldron .

3 . Harvest mandrakes nocturnally ! ( the infinitive phrase is turned into a command )

You can provide a simple subject and complete the verb .

- We will harvest mandrakes nocturnally .

You can treat the phrase as the subject of your sentence and add a predicate .

2 . Muttering over the cauldron is a bad habit that good witches should avoid .

- Muttering over the cauldron , the witch failed to enunciate the incantation clearly .

You can also provide the dependent clause ( or the infinitive phrase ) with an independent clause to lean on :

1 . When the troll bounced off the banister , he bowled over the professor of  herbology .

- The little wizards laughed to see such sport when the troll bounced off the banister .

To harvest mandrakes nocturnally is a task that only a fearless junior wizard would undertake .

- To harvest mandrakes nocturnally , you must wait for a completely moonless night .

The next to last sentence fragment is a participial phrase .

To fix it , you can provide a simple subject and create a verb .

We prepared the purple potion .

He lurked beneath the balustrade .

You can assume an implicit subject (you) and turn it into a command :

Prepare the purple potion !

Lurk beneath the balustrade !

Common Grammar and Usage Errors .

Some errors are more common than others . Here are a dozen that appear frequently on the examination . Watch out for them when you do the practice exercises and when you take the SAT .

1 . The Run-On Sentence

Mary’s party was very exciting ,it lasted until 2 A.M.

It is raining today , I need a raincoat .

You may also have heard this error called a comma splice . It can be connected by making two sentences instead of one :

Mary’s party was very exciting . It lasted until 2 .A.M .

or by using a semicolon in place of the comma :

Mary’s party was very exciting ; It lasted until 2 A.M .

or by proper compounding :

Mary’s party was very exciting and lasted until 2 A.M.

You can also correct this error with proper subordination .

The second example above could be corrected :

Since it is raining today , I need a raincoat .

It is raining today , so I need a raincoat .

2 . The Sentence Fragment

Since John was talking during the entire class , making it impossible for anyone to concentrate .

This is the opposite of the first error , instead of too much in one sentence , here you have too little . Do not be misled by the length of the fragment . It must have a main clause before it can be a complete sentence . All you have in this example is the clause . You still need a result . For example , the sentence could be corrected .

Since John was talking during the entire class , making it impossible for anyone to concentrate , the teacher made him sty after school .

3. Error in the Case of a Noun or Pronoun

Between you and I , this test is not really very difficult .

Case problems usually involve personal pronouns , which are in the nominative case ( I , he , she , we , they , who ) when they are used as subject or predicate nominatives , and in the subject case ( me , him , her , us , them , whom ) when they are used as direct objects , indirect objects , and objects of prepositions . In this example , if you realize that between is a preposition , you know that “I” should be changed to the objective “me” because it is the subject of a preposition .

4 . Error in Subject-Verb Agreement

Harvard College , along with several other Ivy League schools , are sending students to the conference .

Phrases starting with “along with” or “as well as “ or “ in addition to” that are placed in between the subject and the verb do not affect the verb . The subject of this sentence is Harvard College , so the verb should be “is sending” .

There is three bears living in that house .

Sentences that begin with “there” almost always have the subject after the verb . The subject of this sentence is “bears” , so the verb should be “are” .

5 . Error in Pronoun-Number Agreement

Every one of the girls on the team is trying to do their best .

Every pronoun must have a specific noun or noun substitute for an antecedent , and it must agree with that antecedent in number ( singular or plural ) . In this example , “their” refers to one and must be singular :

Every one of the girls on the team is trying to do her best .

6 . Error in the Tense or Form of a Verb

After the sun set behind the mountain , a cool breeze sprang up and brought relief from the heat .

Make sure the verbs in a sentence appear in the proper sequence of tenses , so that it is clear what happened when . Since , according to the sentence , the breeze did not appear until after the sun had finished setting , the setting belongs in the past perfect tense :

After the sun had set behind the mountain , a cool breeze sprang up and brought relief from the heat .

7. Error in Logical Comparison

I can go to California or Florida . I wonder which is best .

When you are comparing only two things , you should use the comparative form of the adjective , not the superlative :

I wonder which is better .

Comparisons must also be complete and logical .  

The room on the second floor are larger than the first floor .

It would be a strange building that had rooms larger than an entire floor . Logically , this sentence should be corrected to :

The rooms on the second floor are larger than those on the first floor .

8 . Adjective and Adverb Confusion

She did good on the test .

They felt badly about leaving their friends .

These are the two most common ways that adjectives and adverbs are misused . In the first example , when you are talking about how someone did , you want the adverb “well” , not the adjective “good” :

She did well on the test .

In the second example , after a linking verb like “feel” you want a predicate adjective to describe the subject :

They felt bad about leaving their friends .

8 . Error in Modification and Word Order

Reading for the book , the ladder slipped out from under him .

A participial phrase at the beginning of the sentence should describe the subject of the sentence . Since it doesn’t make sense to think of a ladder reaching for a book , this participle is left dangling with nothing to modify . The sentence needs some rewriting :

When he reached for the book , the ladder slipped out from under him .   

9 . Error in Parallelism

In his book on winter sports , the author discusses ice-skating , skiing , hockey , and how to fish in an ice-covered lake .

Logically , equal and similar ideas belong in similar form . This shows that they are equal . In this sentence , the author discusses four sports , and all four should be presented the same way :

In his book on winter sports , the author discusses ice skating , skiing , hockey , and fishing in an ice-covered lake .

Error in Diction or Idiom

The affects of the storm could be seen everywhere .

Your ear for the language will help you handle these errors , especially if you are accustomed to reading standard English . These questions test you on words that are frequently misused , on levels of usage ( informal versus formal ) , and on standard English idioms . In this example , the verb “affect” meaning “to influence” has been confused with the noun “effect” , meaning “result”. 

The effects of the storm could be seen everywhere .

4- ] SAT .The Critical Reading Question

4 - ] Critical Reading Question

 

The Critical Reading Question

Exercise D

This exercise provides you with a mixture of reading passages similar in variety to what you will encounter on the SAT . Answer all questions on the basis of what is [ stated ] or [ implied ] in the passages .

The following passage analyzes the contributions of the Mexican cowboy to American culture and to the English language .

            The near-legendary history of the American West might have been quite different had the Mexican not brought cattle-raising to New Mexico and Texas . The Spanish style of herding cattle on open ranges was different from the style of other Europeans , particularly the English . The American rancho was possible because of the lack of enough water for normal agricultural practices , and because of the easy availability of large amounts of land. This land-extensive form of cattle-raising required different techniques and brought forth the vaquero , the cowboy ( from the Spanish vaca , cow ) who tended the widely-scattered herds of Spanish longhorn cattle . Because of the American penchant to be considered the inventors of nearly everything , the wide-open style of cattle-ranching was appropriated from the Mexican originators . As popular a folk-hero as the American cowboy is , he owes his development to the Spanish and the Mexicans , not the English . It is quite probable , as McWilliams asserts , that “with the exception of the capital required to expand the industry , there seems to have been nothing the American rancher or cowboy contributed to the development of cattle-raising in the Southwest .”

            Other contributions of the Mexican cowboy were : the western-style saddle with a large , ornate horn : chaparejos , or chaps ; lazo ,lasso ; la reata ,  lariat ; the cinch ; the halter ; the mecate , or horse-hair rope ; chin strap for the hat ; feed bag for the horse ; ten-gallon hat ( which comes from a mistranslation of a Spanish phrase “su sombrero galoneado” that really meant a “festooned” or “alooned” hat ) .Cowboy slang came from such words as : juzgado , hoosegow ; ranchero , rancher ; estampida , stampede ; calabozo , calaboose ; and pinto for a painted horse .

            Just as the Mexican association for the protection of the rights of sheepherders gave rise to the American Sheepman’s Association , the Spanish system of branding range animals and registering these brands became standard practice among Anglo stockmen . The idea of brands originated in North Africa and was brought to Spain by the Moors , along with their stocky ponies . The Mexican brands are of great antiquity , having been copied from earlier Indian signs which include symbols of the sky-- sun , moon , and stars . Hernando Cortez is said to have been the first to use a brand on the continent .

1 . Which of the following would be the best title for this passage ?   

(A) How to Herd Cattle

(B) The American Cowboy : A Romantic Figure

(C) Farming Practices in Europe and America

(D) Hispanic Contributions to Western Ranching

(E) Spanish Influence on American Culture

2 . It can be inferred from the underlined lines in paragraph one that American ranches developed in the West rather than the East because

(A) more Spanish-speaking people lived in the West

(B)there was more money available in the West

(C) people in the East were more bound by tradition

(D) many jobless men in the East wanted to become cowboys

(E) there was more unsettled land available in the West

3 . The author gives examples of cowboy slang in the underlined lines in paragraph two in order to

(A) arouse the reader’s interest

(B) show that he is familiar with the subject

(C) prove that many cowboys lacked education

(D) point out the differences between America’s Eat and West

(E) demonstrate how these terms originated

4 . According to the author , which of the following did Mexicans contribute to ranching ?

I . Money to buy ranches

II . Methods of handling animals

III . Items of riding equipment

(A) I only (B) II only (C) III only (D) I and II only (E) II and III only

5. Which of the following best describes the development of this passage ?

(A) Major points , minor points

(B) Statement of problem , examples , proposed solution

(C) Introduction , positive factors , negative factors

(D) Cause , effects

(E) Comparison , contrast

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In this introduction to a pictorial survey of African art , the author describes the impact of African sculpture .

            When you first saw a piece of African art , it impressed you as a unit ; you did not see it as a collection of shapes or forms . This , of course , means that the shapes and volumes within ths sculpture itself were coordinated so successfully that the viewer was affected emotionally .

            It is entirely valid to ask how , from a purely artistic point of view , this unity was achieved . And we must also inquire whether there is a recurrent pattern of rules or a plastic language and vocabulary which is responsible for the powerful communication of emotion which the best African sculpture achieves . If thee is such a pattern or rules , ae these rules applied consciously or instinctively to obtain so many woks of such high artistic quality ?

            It is obvious from the study of art history that an intense and unified emotional experience , such as the Christian credo of the Byzantine or 12th or 13th century Europe , when expressed in art forms , gave great unity ,coherence , and power to art . But such an integrated feeling was only the inspirational element for the artist , only the starting point of the creative art . The expression of this emotion and its realization in the work could be done only with discipline and thorough knowledge of the craft . And the African sculptor was a highly trained workman . He started his apprenticeship with a master when a child , and he learned the tribal styles and the use of the tools and the nature of woods so mthoroughly that his carving became what Boas calls “motor action.” He carved automatically and instinctively .

            The African carver followe his rules without thinking of them ; indee , they never seem to have been formulated in words . But such rules existed , for accident and coincidence cannot explain the common plastic language of African sculpture . There is too great a consistency from one work to another . Yet , although the African , with amazing unsight into art , used these rules , I am certain that he was not conscious of them . This is the great mystery of such a traditional art : talent , or the ability certain people have , without conscious efforts , to follow the rules which later the analyst can discover only from the work of art which has already been created .   

6 . The author is primarily concerned  with

(A) discussing how African sculptors achieved their effects

(B) listing the rules followed in African art

(C) relating African art to the art of 12th or 13th century Europe

(D) integrating emotion and realization

(E) expressing the beauty of African art

7 . According to the passage , one of the outstanding features of African sculpture is

(A) its subject matter

(B) the feeling it arouses

(C) the training of the artists

(D) its strangeness

(E) its emphasis on movement

8 . The underlined word “plastic” means

(A) synthetic (B) linguistic (C) consistent (D) sculptural(E) repetitive

9.According to the information in the passage , an African carver can be best compared to a

(A) chef following a recipe

(B) fluent speaker of English who is just beginning to study French

(C) batter who hits a homerun in his or her first baseball game

(D) concert pianist performing a well-rehearsed concert

(E) writer who is grammatically expert but stylistically uncreative

10 . Which of the following titles best summarizes the content of the passage ?

(A) The Apprenticeship of the African Sculptor

(B) The History of African Sculpture

(C) How African Art Achieves Unity

(D) Analyzing African Art

(E) The Unconscious Rules of African Art

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            The following passages present two portraits of grandmothers . In Passage 1 Mary McCarthy shares her memories of her Catholic grandmother , who raised McCarthy and her brother after their parents’ death . In Passage 2 Caroline Heibrun tells of her Jewish grandmother , who died when Heibrun was 10 .

Passage 1

            Luckily , I am writing a memoir and not a work of fiction , and therefore I do not have to account for my grandmother’s unpleasing character and look for the Oedipal fixation or the traumatic experience which would give her that clinical authenticity that is nowadays so desirable in portraiture . I do not know how my grandmother got the way she was ; I assume , from family photographs and from the inflexibility of her habits , that she was always the same , and it seems as idle to inquire into her childhood as to ask what was ailing Iago or look for the error in toilet-training that was responsible for Lady Macbeth . My grandmother’s sexual history , bristling with infant morality in the usual style of her period , was robust and decisive : three tall , handsome sons grew up , and one attentive daughter . Her husband treated her kindly . She had money , many grandchildren , and religion to sustain her . White hair , glasses , soft skin , wrinkles , needlework - all the paraphernalia of motherliness were hers ; yet it was a cold , grudging , disputatious old woman who sat all day in her sunroom making tapestries from a pattern , scanning religious periodicals , and setting her iron jaw against any infraction of her ways .   

            Combativeness was , I suppose , the dominant trait in my grandmother’s nature . An aggressive churchgoer , she was quite without Christian feeling ; the mercy of the Lord Jesus had never entered her heart . Her piety was an act of war against the Protestant ascendancy . The religious magazines on her table furnished her not with food for meditation but with fresh pretexts for anger ; articles attacking birth control , divorce , mixed marriages , Darwin , and secular education were her favorite reading . The teachings of the Church did not interest her , except as they were a rebuke to others ; “Honor thy father and thy mother” , a commandment she was no longer called upon to practice , was the one most frequently on her lips . The extermination of Protestantism , rather than spiritual perfection , was the boon she prayed for . Her mind was preoccupied with conversion ; the capture of a soul for God much diverted her fancy -- it made one less Protestant in the world . Foreign missions , with their overtones of good will and social service , appealed to her less strongly ; it was not a harvest of souls that my grandmother had in mind .

            This pugnacity of my grandmother’s did not confine itself to sectarian enthusiasm . There was the defense of her furniture and her house against the imagined encroachments of visitors .With her , this was not the gentle and tremulous protectiveness endemic in old ladies , who fear for the safety of their possessions with a truly touching anxiety , inferring the fragility of all things from the brittleness of their old bones and hearing the crash of mortality in the perilous tinkling of a tea-cup . My grandmother’s sentiment was more autocratic : she hated having her chairs sat in or her lawns stepped on or the water turned on in her basins , for no reason at all except pure officiousness ; she even grudged the mailman his daily promenade up her sidewalk . Her home was a center for power , and she would not allow it to be derogated by easy or democratic usage . Under her jealous eye , its social properties had atrophied , and it functioned in the family structure simply as a political headquarters . The family had no friends , and entertaining was held to be a foolish and unnecessary courtesy as between blood relations . Holiday dinners fell , as a duty , on the lesser members of the organization : the daughters and daughters-in-law ( converts from the false religion ) offered up Baked Alaska on a platter like the head of John the Baptist , while the old people sat enthroned at the table , and only their digestive processes acknowledged , with rumbling , enigmatic salvos , the fatal day .

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Passage 2

            My grandmother , one of Howe’s sustaining women , not only ruled the household with an arm of iron , but kept a store to support them all , her blond , blue-eyed husband enjoying life rather than struggling through it . My grandmother was one of this powerful women who know that they stand between their families and an outside world filled with temptations to failure and shame . I remember her as thoroughly loving . But there can be no question that she impaired her six daughters for autonomy as thoroughly as if she had crippled them -- more so . The way to security was marriage ; the dread that stood in the way of this was sexual dalliance , above all pregnancy . The horror of pregnancy in an unmarried girl is difficult , perhaps , to recapture now . Foe a Jewish girl not to be a virgin on marriage was failure . The male’s rights were embodied in her lack of sexual experience , in the knowledge that he was the first , the owner .

            All attempts at autonomy had to be frustrated . And of course , my grandmother’s greatest weapon was her own vulnerability . She had worked hard , only her daughters knew how hard . She could not be comforted or repaid - as my mother would feel repaid -- by a daughter’s accomplishments , only by her marriage .

11 . McCarthy’s attitude toward her grandmother is best described as   

(A) tolerant (B) appreciative (C) indifferent (D) nostalgic (E) sardonic

12 . The underlined word in Passage 1”idle” means

(A) slothful (B) passive (C) fallow (D) useless (E) unoccupied

13 . According to McCarthy , a portrait of a character in a work of odern fiction must have

(A) photographic realism

(B) psychological validity

(C) sympathetic attitudes

(D) religious qualities

(E) historical accuracy

14 . McCarthy’s primary point in describing her grandmother’s physical appearance in the underlined lines Passage 1 is best summarized by which of the following axioms ?

(A) Familiarity breeds contempt .

(B) You can’t judge a book by its cover .

(C) One picture is worth more than ten thousand words .

(D) There’s no smoke without fire .

(E) Blood is thicker than water .

15 . By describing ( Passage 1 , paragraph three - With her ,…..of a tea-cup ) the typical old woman’s fear for the safety of her possessions , McCarthy emphasizes that

(A) her grandmother feared the approach of death

(B) old women have dangerously brittle bones

(C) her grandmother possessed considerable wealth

(D) her grandmother had different reasons for her actions

(E) visitors were unwelcome in her grandmother’s home

16 .The underlined word “properties” in Passage 1 means

(A) belongings (B) aspects (C) holdings (D) titles (E) acreage

17. Heilbrun in Passage 2 is critical of her grandmother primarily because

(A) she would not allow her husband to enjoy himself

(B) she could not accept her own vulnerability

(C) she fostered a sense of sexual inadequacy

(D) she discouraged her daughters’ independence

(E) she physically injured her children

18. By describing the extent of the feeling against pregnancy in unmarried girls in Passage 2 - paragraph 1- The horror of pregnancy … the owner ) , Heilbrun helps the reader understand

(A) her fear of being scorned as an unwed mother

(B) why her grandmother strove to limit her daughters’ autonomy

(C) her disapproval of contemporary sexual practices

(D) her awareness of her mother’s desire for happiness

(E) how unforgiving her grandmother was

19 . In stating that her grandmother’s greatest weapon was her own vulnerability ( Passage 2 -paragraph 2 ) , Heilbrun implies that her grandmother got her way by exploiting her children’s

(A) sense of guilt

(B) innocence of evil

(C) feeling of indifference

(D) abdication of responsibility

(E) lack of experience

20. Each passage mentions which of the following as being important to the writer’s grandmother ?

(A) governing the actions of others

(B) contributing to religious organizations

(C) protecting her children’s virtue

(D) marrying off her daughters

(E) being surrounded by a circle of friends

21 . McCarthy would most likely react to the characterization of her grandmother , like Heilbrun’s grandmother , as one of the “sustaining women” ( the underlined lines Passage 2 first two lines ) by pointing out that

(A) this characterization is not in good taste

(B) the characterization fails to account for her grandmother’s piety

(C) the details of the family’s social life support this characterization

(D) her grandmother’s actual conduct is not in keeping with this characterization

(E) this characterization slightly exaggerates her grandmother’s chief virtue

Answer Key

1 .D 2 . E 3 . E 4 . E 5 . A 6 . A 7 . B 8. D 9 . D 10 . E 11 . E 12 . D 13 . B 14 . B 15 . D 16 . B

17 . D 18 . B 19 . A 20 A 21 . D

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